My friend Alicia started this story at 3:37pm the other day. I wrapped it up at 4:17. It was a lot of fun. I thought it wasn’t too shabby so I decided to post it. The chat format makes it look like a narrative poem. Enjoy.
once upon a time
there were a group of girls that were friends
one day
they decided to take a trip to a distant land
they started out late one night
in the rain
there was a chill in the air despite it being summertime
the wind breathed of something on their heels
something scary
but they pressed on
and laughed in the face of the black unknown
mile after mile they went
determined to see the distant land
until
one day
they arrived
they all broke out into song and dance at such a wonderous discovery
one might have even cried
at the one who had been lost along the way
well
as they were traveling
the scary thing caught up with the one who was struggling
the Scary thing tangled up her legs and made her fall
it slithered up the fallen girl and slipped into the crevice of her soul
she got up and walked on so the others didn’t know the danger she was in
the danger they were all in
so they arrived in a distant land
and they rejoiced at what was there
but the one girl
the one who the Scary thing invaded
she stood aloof from the others
while they sang and danced
she backed away
onto the road they’d taken
and left the others there
the others soon noticed
their friend had disappeared
so they decided to set up camp
and search for her
they combed the perimeter
and found all manner of berries
and wild corn
and game, which they made note to hunt later
but this group
could not find their friend
they searched into the late night
and into the morning twilight
when suddenly
from the trail that led to this distant land
appeared a young lady
she introduced herself
and asked if she could be their friend
the others discussed it
and decided it wouldn’t hurt
so they welcomed the new girl into their group
this new girl, however
had an essence about her
and the others could tell
that something wasn’t quite right
but they continued to befriend her
they played together
they sang
she happened to know a lot of the songs they knew
they danced and ate and lived many days in harmony
until one day
one of the original group went missing
and the new girl was the first to let everyone know
and she didn’t know if she went wandering off and got lost
or something worse
something much worse
so the group split up
combed the perimeter of their little colony
along their gardens
up in the watchtower
they couldn’t find her
after a few hours
they did come upon a pile of bones
bones that glistened
still looked moist
as if whatever devoured the once whole being had just finished
the group assumed
this was their friend
and gathered her bones
and performed a proper burial
the new girl
as a long plume of smoke ascended into the sky
shed a single tear
for this friend
that she had stumbled upon so many days ago
the group mourned an appropriate season
then began harvesting their crops
when one of the girls saw a dog sitting at the edge of the garden
this dog
had the eyes of the Scary thing
but no one else recognized them
no one else
but the new girl
she saw the dog
and she turned around
terrified
wondering if he smelled her
she glanced over her shoulder
and saw the dog’s eyes
and the dog’s eyes saw her
the new girl
approached the group
she told them
she knows what happened to their old friend
the one they just buried
and the one before, from weeks ago
and the new girl proposed an idea
that the others wouldn’t even think of accepting
because this girl was their friend
but this girl knew things
things that were dangerous for the group
and had wanted to protect the group
but failed
twice
possibly three times
because the dog was there now
the dog was there
this new girl
she took the dog
by the scruff
and led him to the trailhead
and she took his paws
in her hands
and she muttered something
indecipherable
over and over and over again
until slowly
this dog
transformed
writhing
howling
that turned to groans
and what was left
was their old friend
the Scary thing was gone
but the new girl
was no longer
the group brought their old friend back to health
fed her
gave her clothes
and decided it was time to settle elsewhere
they packed their things
and shrouded the new girl
and carried her body to the river
and built a raft and set her body on it
and set her downstream
while the others
headed upstream
ready to start over
again